Blog Post #12

My essay #3 is slowing along but I'm struggling on trying to make it a strong paper. I don't usually make strong revisions because I'm lazy and tend to write my papers close to the due date. Revisions would probably save me from making little mistakes that bring down my grade. I'm not a strong writer and I have a hard time creating a strong all sound paper. For my essay #3 I am trying to use good quotes that support my thesis. Also making sure  that every paragraph of my paper has a clear point that ties back to my thesis. But I'm going to be turning my paper into the no questions asked because I want to spend extra time to make sure that my essay is strong. I also want to keep using the learning center and have my peers revise it. This is a link to a site that helps with essay revisions: http://academic.brooklyn.cuny.edu/english/melani/cs6/revise.html